Can you help me with this poem??

Question

Ok, 4th day of 7th grade and they make us write a poem. I have to share this out loud in front of the class so plz nothing weird. It's called an "i am poem".......it's just a bunch of personal stuff i have to throw in a poem. here's an example we got: I am a fun girl who loves horses(not the first line, the title)

(ok THIS is the first line) I am a fun girl who loves horses

I wonder more about colts each day

I hear horses speak

I see a stable full of winged horses

I want to be around horses forever

I am a fun girl who loves horses

I pretend I am with a pegusus

I feel safe when i am around these creatures

I touch the soft fur of a colt

I worry when i am alone

I cry when colts die

I am a fun girl who loves horses

I understand i can't ride a horse everyday

I say "let them run free"

I dream that one day i will ride a horse everyday

I try to get to know horses better

I hope i will soend more time with horses

I am a fun girl who loves horses

Ok, it's 18 lines. It doesn't have to be about one topic like the one above. Also that's not the exact example because we only saw the exact example in class. Here's mine so far:

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

I wonder (help me with this part plz)

I hear birds chirping

I see the sandy beach

I want to live a long happy life

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

I pretend (help me here)

I feel (help me here)

I touch the silver lining of each cloud

I worry when im confused (i dont like this part that much plz help me)

I cry when something bad happens ( i also dont like this part)

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

I understand some things won't be fair

I say "the grass if greener on the other side" (any of quotes like that?plz help)

I dream the world will become a better place

I try my best at everything i do

I hope for world peace

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

thanks 4 reading this i bet it's really long. PLease tell me if you think i should change anything else. thanx.

Answer 1

hi. ok so when i was in 8th grade we had to write the same thing but it was a little bit more complex. im very good with poetry so i hope this helps. its hard because i dont know you but ill do my best.

-i wonder if they love me back.

-i pretend i can help them out

-i feel i have the knack.

if this is the direction you want to go i i will see about helping you more, if not maybe i can help you swing it in a different way. watever i can do yo help.

-Holly Vengeance

Answer 2

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

I wonder if I am able to see a ghost??

I hear birds chirping everyday

I see the sandy beach on sunny days

I want to live a long happy life

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

I pretend that I am a goat

I feel warm when I brush my teeth

I touch the silver lining of each cloud

I worry when i know im up to no good

I cry when i don't get my way

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

I understand some things won't be fair

I also say "You can't fix something you never broke."

I dream the world will become a better place

I try my best everyday

I hope that I can help the world in many ways

I am a friendly girl who loves animals

*Hope this helped!!*

-Marissa.C <33