Can you help me with this song?

Question

ik it sucks but im stuck it goes to the song skyway avenue but we the kings im stuck at about 1:22 but it doesn't rly have to go with the song the songs just helping me.....anyways hears what i have so far

Every time I look in your eyes

My heart melts deep inside

Thinking all of you

Hope your thinking of me to

Hope that are love is true

Cuz all I think about is you cuz

Every thing I do I do it thinking of you

Trying so hard to keep you mine

cause if you died I would die to

We will fall together

From a buildings ledge

Never looking back at what we’ve done

We’ll say it was love

Cause I would die for you

Would you die for me to

I will never change my mind

Hoping your loves not a lie

anyways ik it sucks....but im writing it for my boyfriend and he will love it no matter what can you like help me with the next line or next few lines or give me ideas or like tell me to change someting plz cuz im going away for like 3 weeks so im writing him it

Answer 1

well i think its sweet that you would do such a thing also you should just let all your feelings spill out and then once your done just fancy it up with some rhymes. it'll be great