Can you help me with wedding vows?

Question

I know it is probably wrong to be asking for help with such a personal thing...but I really want them to be something my fiance will remember. He is an excellent writer. Everything he has written to me during our courtship has been so passionate, so romantic, and extremely heartfelt. I want to give him the same back, however I lack the literary skills. Please, if there are any good writers out there, can you help me come up with something fantastic.

Here is somethings about him. He is my everything. He is always there for me. He is an excellent father. He makes me feel like a princess. He is supportive. He is my bestfriend. He makes me want to be a better person. I want to spend my whole life with only him. I want him to know just how much I love him.

Please help if you can. Thank you in advance.

P.S. I'm sorry if this seems a little out of place, but I posted this here to try and attract writers or poets.

Answer 1

Let's see: your own words actually seem rather elegant to me.  Can we adapt them?

You wrote:

"He is my everything. He is always there for me. He is an excellent father. He makes me feel like a princess. He is supportive. He is my bestfriend. He makes me want to be a better person. I want to spend my whole life with only him. I want him to know just how much I love him."

OK, let's turn that into vows:

"[name of groom], I want you to know that you are my everything.  You are an excellent father. You make me feel like a princess.  You are supportive.  You are my best friend.  You make me want to be a better person.  I promise that I will devote myself to you as your wife for the rest of my life, and that I will try to find new ways to show you how much I love you."

Thanks for posting this question, reminds me of coming up with vows for my own wedding--and my wife and I regularly try to show each other how much we are in love, even after all these years...

Answer 2

You just wrote your own vows in your question.  The answer lies above.  You will have a meaningful ceremony...Congratulations!