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Can you offer me any critique on my Poem?

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Is there a word to best describe,

a personality or what's inside?

To me what lifestyle would you perscribe?

In how many boxes and cliques may i reside?

If i choose wrong where should i hide?

Which lable should i don upon my chest?

"Something easy to understand,

one word! - would be best."

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  1. It is good. I think lable is spelled label though.


  2. "i like". shoot thats 2 .oops 6. dam!

  3. it''s ok, you should lengthen it tho. trry to use different rhyming words in the second stanza,

  4. I suggest that you check your spelling and grammar. Unless, of course, there is some significance in your lack of capitalization for the word "I".

    If so, it's not coming through.

    Other than that, it's good.

  5. "Self-regarding" is the word you're looking for.

  6. Keep writing, you'll get better and when your older you might have a poem in you that will last forever.

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