Can you please check out my site and give me some suggestions?

Question

It's a lot of work in progress , but this is only less than a day of work and i plan for more details and such www.buydefelice.com

Answer 1

Looks fine, but I'd break up that block of text into smaller blocks.

Makes the text easier to read and, thereby, more 'friendly'.

Answer 2

Try adding some graphics to it to make it more intresting.  It's ok with what you have.  Add some photos as well and a little biography about yourself and your website like what made you want to make the website you made. Good luck.