Can you please check out my website and tell me what you think thanks?

Question

Hi, I am an event coordinator.I have been working in this profession for over 10 years. I have just opened my own event management buisness here in Ireland. I am currently having a proffesional webpage built for me at my own domain with before and after pictures as well as web streaming. Until then however I needed a webpage that people can search for my companies details. I have built two of these pages. The newest one I have built is http://amazingevents.wetpaint.com

the latter was

http:// www.freewebs.com/amazingeventspr

I would really apprecriate it if you can take the time to look at the webpages and let me know what you think. Which one I should use until my new one is up and running. As well as any comments you have. If your comments help me to improve my site then they are worth their weight in gold thank you .

Answer 1

Great, but i do have to say u wrote too much on one page.  Too keep someone interested you should split it into a couple different pages with links to them at the top.

Answer 2

Well, to be honest... it is very busy.

The words are not alligned properly.

But the content and message is good.

You just need to clean it up a bit.

Good luck!

Answer 3

I just changed some stuff. I spell checked it etc. Looks good to me.

Answer 4

A little wordy, needs some spacing out and if site allows some photos/graphics.

Maybe a slightly duller colour, I love red but ten mins on your page n i'll end up with a migrane

Answer 5

Paragraphs!

Your page right now is a big block of text, and nobody likes to read big blocks of text. Stick in lots of whitespace - paragraphs, images, anything to break up the text.

Oh, and don't centre-align the text either; it makes it much harder to read.

Answer 6

IMHO, the colors in your earlier page are better, as well as your tab links, and upon further review, entirely better than "professiona"l,

other than adding before and after pictures as well as web-streaming.