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Can you please link these two paragraphs together?..thankyou, well apreciated...im stuck!

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My feeling is that while money does not buy happiness, it DOES buy opportunity. So 10 million won't guarantee happiness, but it WILL get me a nice house on the beach in Aruba and a beautiful boat and allow me to spend free time meeting friends, or just doing things that truly make me happy.

Money was always meant to be a form of trade in order to get what was needed. Sometimes getting a need filled will bring happiness, but it never really lasts. Once a need is filled, there's always another need popping up. Then, there's want, which is different than need. We can't live without food, but we can live without ice cream. We can want the most expencive , but we don't need it to live. It's the act of buying that can make us feel happy, but it's never completely fulfilling. If it was, then there'd be a lot of companies closing up shop because everyone had all they needed or wanted. The thing with money is, it eventually runs out. If we were only happy because of the money, then we'd be very disappointed when it ran out. It's best to put your trust in things that always remain constant, and never run out. Of course, that's another story in itself.

thankyou very much, and if your just going to tell me to do it my self dont bother, ive tried. thanks.

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  1. "My feeling is that while money does not buy happiness directly, it DOES buy opportunities that can give you happiness if you spend it wisely. So 10 million won't guarantee happiness, but it WILL get me a nice house on the beach in Aruba and a beautiful boat and allow me to spend free time meeting friends, or just doing things that truly make me happy.

    Money was always meant to be a form of trade in order to get what was needed. Sometimes getting a need filled will bring happiness, but it never really lasts. Once a need is filled, there's always another need popping up. Then, there's want, which is different than need. We can't live without food, but we can live without ice cream. We can want the most expencive , but we don't need it to live. It's the act of buying that can make us feel happy, but it's never completely fulfilling. If it was, then there'd be a lot of companies closing up shop because everyone had all they needed or wanted. The thing with money is, it eventually runs out. If we were only happy because of the money, then we'd be very disappointed when it ran out. It's best to put your trust in things that always remain constant, and never run out. Of course, that's another story in itself."

    Your whole report is very good as it explores different points of views! :) I've slightly edited the 1st para. in order for it to sound better.

    Other than that, the paragraphs link up very smoothly! Great job!


  2. It looks pretty good just the way it is.

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