Can you please read my poem? PLEASE?

Question

This is a poem I wrote about this guy.....I'm not planning to give it to him.... but what do you think about it?

Name of poem: "I Can't Take It Anymore"

I can’t take it anymore,

The pain that weakens me with every breath

With every heartbreak that I get

The way I feel when you don’t speak to me

The thoughts about you that I think

The way I can’t get you out my mind, heart, or soul

The way I feel when you speak to them

The way you ignore me

The lies that you said

The words that were said, just lies…

“I love you”

I believed you

I can’t take it anymore,

I wish you would speak to me.

The way you speak to them.

The words you told her,

“hello” you said,

but not to me

I knew you forgot about me

I can’t take it anymore,

Just reassure

That those things were true

That you do love me

That you didn’t forget about me.

Say “hello” and make me feel safe

Because, I just, cant take it anymore

Answer 1

i really like it, it's best for me.

Answer 2

boo hoo give it to the dude and dont sign it and type it why so he has to think who did i do this to see now he might try to become a person instead of what he is now  

Answer 3

I like it, Iv felt that way b4, been there b4, very good. lol

Answer 4

You need to toughen up a...seriously...stop being such a broken ***...

Answer 5

Hello...

Seems like a great poem, but what do i know, im not poem critic.