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Can you please suggest tips to improve this story ?

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And also, rate out of 100

It's 1900 words . . .

Clown: (1) a job-description in some cases; (2) an important instrument for insulting one’s enemies.

In my case, it's the former.

My mother would say that it is a worthy deed to alleviate a person's sorrow and pain, and to give him joy and happiness, (although naturally, she never suggested that I become a clown). It takes considerable effort to transform someone's tears into smiles; I have to cry to make them laugh; I have to fall from great heights, to make them jump with joy.

Among the various get-ups of a clown, my favorite is when I paint black tears under my eyes and a red line arising from my from the tip of my lips, stretching downwards, forming an inverted smile. It seems the best description of a clown's life. He cries, and people laugh.

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  1. interesting story.

    about 80-90 out of 100?

    I dont think i can suggest tips.. as im not a good writer.

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