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Can you please tell me what you think?

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These are the first three poems i ever write

all three were written from the bottom of my heart so please tell me what you think and if you want you can also seem them here

http://www.quizilla.com/my/profile

I need you

By: Alvaro C aka Pepsi Man

i need you

i swear its true

ever since that day

i dream about you everyday

i have you on my mind

and i wish you were all mine

your smile drives me crazy

its makes me think of daises

the sparkel of yours eyes

it makes me feel like the sky

your beauty overall leaves me in awe

i swear you have no flaws

i hope you see

how much i need

to be with you

til we say adieu

Just When

By:Alvaro C aka Pepsi Man

Just when i think i have all the answers you change the questions

to leave me alone in depression

just when i have gained confidence in myself to be with you

you do things to make me blue

just when i realized you're the one for me

you just let me be

just remember you will always be in my heart

even if you depart

Just When V.2

By:Alvaro C aka Pepsi Man

Just when i think i have all the answers you change the questions

and go get yourself a boyfriend

and leave me in depression

i just dont aprehend

i see you and him together

i wish it was me

you leave me at the end of my tether

you make me feel like a nobody

but you'll always be in my heart

i will always be your friend

even if you depart

til the very end.

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  1. You got talent. These are really good seriously. I've had poems published in books myself and d**n your poems beat some of the poems published with mine. Their really good. You should keep making them.


  2. it is a very nice poem please post more

  3. You should post those on a website and maybe you can publish them. Please look at mine:

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

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