Can you plz rate my yugioh deck 1-10 and tell me what i should add/take out to make it better?

Question

my deck:

monsters:

blue eyes white dragon x3

curse of dragon x2

gaia the fierce knight x1

armed dragon lv 3 x1

armed dragon lv 5 x2

armed dragon lv 7 x1

armed dragon lv 10 x1

destiny hero defender x2

diabolos king of the abyss x1

goblin attack force x1

silent swordsman lv 3 x2

silent swordsman lv 5 x2

silent swordsman lv 7 x1

swift gaia the fierce knight x1

rituals/fusion:

black luster soldier x1

b eyes ultimate dragon x1

gaia the dragon champion x1

spells:

black luster ritual x1

brain control x1

burst stream of destruction x1

dragons mirror x1

future fusion x1

heavy storm x1

lightning vortex x1

polymerization x1

pot of avarice x2

reasoning x1

spiral spear strike x1

traps:

bottomless trap hole x2

coffin seller x1

magic cylinder x1

mirror force x1

sakuretsu armor x1

my deck is a dragon/warrior deck and i would like to stick to that theme where possible also i dont want to go to far over 40 cards

this is my deck on yugioh world championships 08

my real world deck is way better

Answer 1

i personally think you should mabye have a couple more 4 or more lower /level monsters imean its a good deck but has a few loop holes i would also invest in a dark mirror force and/or a acid trap hole as your monsters are pretty powerful and your opponent will be cowering in defense and you have good monsters so it might be a good idea to  mabye get a harpies feather duster as that would take out the brute of there defences

Answer 2

i think the deck is good but take out some monsters. im not really into yugioh or what ever its called so i dont really no

Answer 3

Well, I see you want to stay with this theme but it is kinda hard to pull this deck off. I can give you some decklists of a Blue Eyes deck, Armed Dragon, Silent Swordsman deck seperate if you want or email me([e-mail]) and I could give you them or give you other ideas/advice/help.