Can you put these things into a poem for me?

Question

10 points to best poem!

Ok, its for my husband. I want to give him a message in a bottle. (literally, I want to have the poem printed on cloth and put into a bottle) I want it to describe my love for him, how thankful I am to have him, how my love will never die, he is my everything, my world. I (princess) have found my prince charming.

he has beautiful blue eyes, beat of his heart, smell of his skin, touching my face, taste of his kiss, warm embrace, calls me "schweetie" and I call him "my baby" or "my love". We have been on vacations to beautiful countries, Italy, France, Switzerland, Germany, Monaco, Holland. We love the ocean, the sun, warmth, shopping, taking pics of me. we are spontaneous and fun. We have been married for 8 months and have 2 beautiful kids, 6 y/o son, 10 week old daughter. Our special saying is "to the moon and back...infinity times, forever, no matter what, no matter where. I love you!"

Thanks so much! I have tried writing something myself, it is just bad!

Answer 1

Roses are red, violets are blue.

Marital bliss, AND a 10 week old?

This is too good to be true!

Answer 2

When your kids gave the "hand turkey" or macaroni art they bring home from school.. what makes it special and fridgeworthy?  It isn't the execution, it is the heart that went into it.  If you give him someone else's words, you cheat him out of what is most important.  Besides how are you going to answer when he asks "Wow, how did you write that?"

Answer 3

Moonlight shines on sapphire eyes (blue eyes)

The likes for wich I would have died(your love)

Beat of your heart next to mine

Hand on my face, touching embrace

The world we know,(vacations) the sea we taste(ocean)

To the moon, infinity times

Forever

No matter what,

No matter where,

No matter why,

I love you

Baby, my love,

Framed a thousand times (pics)

Shaped like a girl and a boy(son and daughter)

To the moon, infinity times

Forever

No matter what,

No matter where,

No matter why,

I love you

My love will last forever

I'll be yours 'til the end of time

Is that ok??? If it's not, I don't mind, I have no experience with love anyway. I'm not suggesting you print the things in parenthesis, it was just referencing. Did my best as quickly as I could, hope you like it!

Answer 4

Sweetie, how bad would it be for you to give him this and say "Here's a poem, from me to you, written by someone I found on the Internet and don't actually know?" I think you should keep trying yourself!