Can you rate my Dark World deck?

Question

Monsters (19):

1x Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

3x Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World

2x Don Zaloog

2x Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer (wanna get rid of)

1x Spirit Reaper

2x Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World

2x Gravekeeper's Guard

1x Evil Hero Malicious Edge

2x Sillva, Warlord of Dark World

1x Treeborn Frog

1x Sangan

1x Cyber Dragon

Spells (15):

1x Book of Moon

1x Smashing Ground

1x Enemy Controller

1x Reinforcement of the Army

1x Brain Control

1x Premature Burial

2x Dark World Lightning

1x Heavy Storm

1x MST

1x Nobleman of Crossout

1x Card Destruction

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Fissure

1x Monster Reborn

Traps (8):

2x Dark Illusion

1x Torrential Tribute

2x Sakuretsu Armor

1x Fine

1x Mirror Force

1x Destruction Jammer

Please rate and pitch suggestions; I know this isn't the best.

Thanks guys.

Answer 1

Dark World Decks usually run more Dark World Cards when u discard a Dark World Monster as a tribute for an effect 2 activate card the monsters effect  doesnt activate u should use cards whose effect is to discard. Some dark world spells and traps do tis and give a lil extra heres my suggestion 4 ur Dark World Deck

Monsters(19)

3x Goldd

3x Sillva

3x Broww

3x Cyber Dragon

Morphing Jar

Sangan

Spirit Reaper

Exiled Force

2x Gren

Reign-Beaux, Overlord of Dark World

Spells(13)

Card Destruction

Heavy Storm

Mystical Space Typhoon

Monster Reborn

Premature Burial

Brain Control

3x Dark World Dealings

3x Dark World Lightning

Smashing Ground

Traps(8)

2x Deck Devastation Virus

Mirror Force

Torrential Tribute

2x Sakuretsu Armor

2x Dark Deal