Can you rate my monarch deck

Question

i made this deck in like 5 min's so it might not be that great

Monsters 21:

1x blowback dragon

2x thestalos fire monarch

1x kuraz light monarch

1x prime mat. dragon

2x giant rat

2x marauding captain

1x mobius

2x caius

1x treeborn frog

1x substitoad

1x raiza

1x granmarg

1x obnoxious celtic guard

1x d.d. warrior lady

1x jinzo

1x sangan

1xsilent swdman lv. 5

Spells 10:

1x reinforcements of the army

1x premature burial

1x the warrior returning alive

1x mage power

1x enemy cortroller

1x monster reincarnation

1x axe of despair

1x heavy storm

1x brain control

1x pot of avarice

Traps 10:

1x dust tornado

3x compulsory evacuation device

1x micro ray

1x royal decree

1x draining shield

1x riryoku feild

1x torrential tribute

1x blast with chain

total: 41

Answer 1

you got it

Answer 2

i would put more monarchs in and build the deck around them.

Answer 3

o.O

wtf...

Answer 4

its ok......i could do better.