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As our world continues to exist, more and more global concerns are occurring. Almost all of them are a result of mans actions. If these concerns are not addressed immediately, it can mean serious trouble for this world and the people in it.
As our world continues to exist, more and more global concerns are occurring. Almost all of them are a result of mans actions. If these concerns are not addressed immediately, it can mean serious trouble for this world and the people in it.
One big global concern is called deforestation; deforestation is when trees are being cut down faster than they can grow back. Trees are cut down for many reasons, sometimes for the use of their wood, and other times just to clear out the area so the land can be used to build farms and houses. One problem with so many trees being cut down is that trees are our source of oxygen, and without them we would not be able to survive. They also filter the air from the carbon dioxide we exhale and if there are no trees the amount of carbon dioxide in the air would be too great. Another problem with deforestation is the wildlife that normally live in the tree now have nowhere to live. Also, the animals that get their source of food from the trees now have nothing to eat. As a result of these things many animals are dying, which interferes with and messes up our food chain.
Another global problem is called desertification. There are some areas in this world, such as Africa, that are near large deserts (Sahara -Africa). Often times in areas such as this, there are Nomads wandering the edges of the deserts. These Nomads cut down all the trees and allow their cattle to graze on the grass. They use up all the green on that area, and then they move onto the next place. Meanwhile there is no plant life holding the topsoil down, so it just blows away. That area of desert eventually turns into more desert, causing the desert to rapidly expand. The sand of the desert is not fertile, and you can’t plant food there, so there is tremendous famine in the areas where the desert has spread. This will eventually cause millions of people to die.
Man causes the world many problems, but we also have the ability to fix them. The countries of the world are starting to realize that in order to fix our global problems; we all need to work together, because if one country continues in their ways, it can mess up the world for all the rest of us forever. We have been taking steps to insure that our world remains the way it was and is supposed to be.
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