Can you see the future?

Question

Prescience?

by C.S. Scotkin

I see a sunny day on Mars

A red reflection to the stars.

Air out words in my head

musty from misuse, or dread.

Muses dancing happily

Around this small space ship.

Answer 1

I know all lines do not have to rhyme - but the last line needs something - it seems to stand out TOO much. Suggestion: how 'bout changing "ship" to "colony".  If this is about the future - you should have a colony set up - by then - anyway ;-) ♥

Answer 2

Muse misuse is a misdemeanie on Mars.

Answer 3

poem of future

keep it up

excellent

Answer 4

At last, the muses are freed !!!  Take me along ...

Answer 5

poetry

love it

Answer 6

let flow with the wind n dusk of the world!

.....................nothing love inthe earth!!

Answer 7

which one?

the future in my head.

or the future after im dead.

(frantically searches for my brochure to Mars)

a happy spaceship is not a lost one.

nice going Cynthia!

Answer 8

"Hi!",

"This is the best shortest poem I've seen.

I hope there is room on the ship for me : )

WELL DONE!

Cheers  : )