Can you tell me how this sounds?

Question

i just put it on youtube but i figured i would try it out here first before i kept it on there. thaks

Answer 1

It sounded nice, but you need to watch out when you transition from a climax to a more relaxed part...Also, make sure your making all the notes flow a little bit more evenly, it sounded kindof scratchy in some areas...But keep up the good work!