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Can you tell me what you think about my poem?

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Its hard to breath and hard to speak as i begin to shake,

In this mind of troubled youth dark thoughts begin to wake,

Shadows creeping up the walls,

Ear splitting shreiks heard by the hour,

A horrible tale of the one who lost it- makes even the sweetest heart go sour,

Punish me if you dare,

Go ahead and try,

For this everlasting life I lead is nothing but a lie,

Oh the pity and oh the sorrow for the girl who lost her mind,

Read this now and save your soul,

Your running out of time.

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  1. depressing....but nice


  2. I LIKE YOUR POEM,IT REALLY CAPTURES THE IMAGINATION!!!!

  3. sounds like someone's hurt in feelings.

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