Can you tell me what you think of this.?

Question

I can't draw very well, but I think my writing is decent, so check this out.

http://s16.photobucket.com/albums/b38/jacque7398/yeah/?action=view&current=silence.jpg

Answer 1

Okay, that seemed more like a little comic than a poem, but whatever.  It was interesting, but was a little too bland for me.

Answer 2

I would try using a different word than communicate, it doesn't match the rest of the vocabulary, but I did enjoy it.