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Can you understand these sentences without difficulty?

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I'm new here today and just wanna say hello to all members of this forum.

I've experienced the internet marketing online for several years but there was no big deal to make a living online and to recommend for other people.

But in this time of worry, I feel like I'm close enough to make money using the proven little known secret which is using by gurus every single day.

I'd like to share with you guys all some tips and tricks to make money in this forum and hope those make each single person more money.

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Can you guys understand these sentences without difficulty ?

Any correction needed ? Please answer my question sincerely!

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  1. I can understand it.

    Yes, there are a few mistakes.

    example:  "I'd like to share with you guys all some tips and tricks to make money in this forum and hope those make each single person more money."  SHOULD BE... ---->

    "I'd like to share some tips and tricks with all of guys to make more  money on this forum.  I hope to allow each and every one of you to make more money."


  2. What does this bit mean: 'there was no big deal to make a living online'.

    And slight correction: 'secret which is using by gurus' should be 'secret which is being used by gurus'.

    What is this for? It sounds as if you are trying to sell something, in which case you would make a far better impression on your clients if you used proper grammar and a slightly more formal style.  Try this:

    'I'm new here today, and I would just like to say hello to all the members of this forum.  I have several years experience with Internet marketing online now, but there was never an opportunity for me to make my living online.'

    And so on. Sorry, I have way too much time on my hands!

  3. Yes i do

  4. Some parts are hard to understand... I don't know exactly what you mean, but here is my suggestion to some changes...:

    I have several years of experience in online marketing, and I've found that it's no big deal (it isn't hard) to make a living online and I can recommend it for other people.

    Right now, I'm making money using a proven, little secret which is being used by marketing gurus every single day.

    I'd like to share some tips and tricks with you guys in this forum on how to make money, and I hope that they will help all of you to do so.

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