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Question

OAKLAND

Why are everyone saying Oakland is horrible ? In the past, there were a lot of killing innocent people and bandits roaring around streets, robbing houses and people are corrupt. They ride on those stagecoaches or steeds, not cars. Dirty streets, houses ruined, killings, robbing, loud, no school for poor only rich,etc. Oakland had been a place of have-nots and rich and cruel. They don't even give a penny to the poor .

Now a day , it changed a lot but robbing, gun bangs, dirty street still exist but it is getting lesser and lesser. Oakland police noose all those gangs. Also a lot of people scaffold a home to children that is homeless or give out money to those have-nots. That is a good thing to do and it sure did helped a lot of people. Neighbors in Oakland helped to build schools for everyone, even poor and rich. In the past, rich people do hire poor but give so little money to them about 1 coin for an hour. Today, it was a lot different from those days, they give like about seven dollar the most an hour. These days can get a lot of money and good life and welfare, even butchers can get a lot of money just to sell meat. Today's Oakland is not so cruel from the past's Oakland.

I still don't understand why people still say Oakland is terrible, since it changed a lot to good things ? San Francisco is cruel and rude too. Once, There were a Gold Rush and everyone came there to get gold but people in S.F force people from other states to dig for them. The worst thing is that they don't get gold for digging. Even though, there is no killing or people dieing, that don't mean it is not cruel to innocent people. Compare San Francisco to Oakland, I still will pick Oakland.

There is a lot of place meaner to people then Oakland. Such as, Germany, Japan, England. I will tell you why Japan is mean. Well, I should say Japan is a disguising, cruel, harmful, and mean place. If you have heard about the World War 2, then you know how disguising is Japan. World War 2 is about Japan having a war with China. Japan soldiers kidnap Chinese and let them suffer by cutting out their hands and feet or just hang them. Also by shotting a bullet right through their head and then they are dead. This is the worst thing that never change in Japan. At least Oakland did change bad things to good but Japan never did. I never heard a lot of rumors about Japan than Oakland. Why? Just can't figure it out.

I think people that think Oakland is horrible or terrible, they are wrong. You can say the past's Oakland is cruel but you can't say today's Oakland is mean. Because I know that now a days had change a lot, and it is so different and nicer from Japan or other places. I know you will never believe that Oakland is nicer then the others, because your inside always have the hate that never can get out. So the only thing I can do is just say, in my believe, Oakland is nicer then others.

Answer 1

That's a lot to write in another language.  I would give it a 3.  I understood what you were saying but there were a lot of grammatical errors.  I don't think you're using the words "noose" and "scaffold" correctly.  Those sentences did not make sense to me.

I would have given you a 4 (better than 3), but I'm not sure why or how you could compare how a city was a couple of hundred years ago with how it is today.  The people aren't the same, the culture is not the same.  Only the geographical location is the same.  That made the whole thing more confusing to me.  Also, many of your examples are vague rather than concrete.  

Still, I think this is a lot to write and overall, it is comprehensible, even if there are many errors.  That is normal when you're writing in another language.

Answer 2

i understand at least what  u are talking about.. i give u 3 :)

Answer 3

No.  I didn't understand.  I give you a 1.

Answer 4

Well done.

3..3 1/2 I'd say