Can you write this in 1st person?[10pts]?

Question

Throughout my life, I have met hundreds of people. However, only a special few have had the ability to make an impact that lasts a lifetime. There are two women in particular who have influenced my life and helped make me what I am today. They were there to lend a hand when I needed it most.

The first woman to greatly impact my life is my Grandmother.

She taught me all the basic essentials in life; essentials such as honesty and integrity which have carried with me throughout my life so far, and will be with me in my future as well. This woman influenced my young life immensely, and steered my life in the right direction. The seven years I was under the care of my Grandmother were the finest years of my life. Unfortunately, days after my seventh birthday my Grandmother passed away, and from that day on my Mother has stepped into my life and has had an even greater impact. She has made an impact on my life by teaching me the values and ideas that hold special to us as human beings. She trained me to understand and create my own personal values; personal values which develop from situations and affairs with the outside world. And from this I was able to construct my own individual values and gained the ability to know when to apply these values. For example, applying religious values in times of happiness and despair,

Answer 1

It is in first person.  Are you looking for a critique, or something else?

Answer 2

yeah that is definitely already in first person. do you mean third person?

Answer 3

it's written in first person already.

Answer 4

The words "I", "my", and "me" repeated over and over make it first person. Third person would say things like He, She, you, her, him, they, them, and so on.

I'm not going to write anything for you as you obviously need to learn the difference between first and third person in the first place.  I also am not willing to do your home work for you. If this needed to be rewritten then you could have done that instead of taking the time to type it out here. It's not that hard to do. Good luck with it!