Can yu qimme yur opinion ?!?! poem..?

Question

..about a young girl who has two dreams about being abused by her husband. but she doesnt usually dream. in the dreams she gets away but he captures her again . the thing is she doesnt have a husband . she's not even old enough. but the dream is so vivid & clear & she can feel all the pain. she thinks it has something to do with her father & the way he treats women. wat do u think of this & the poem ?

I finally found what I’m running from, And the recurring dream is not a myth,I’m not just scared of what I might become,But who I might end up with.Its all a warning, I believe,And not just a coincidence,That the dream is tryna help me perceive,A message beyond normal measurements.It’s happened before, it happened again,And the pain, it just felt so real,

The pleasure was not worth the burdened night spent,The next morning awoke in fear.I tried to understand the meaning of it all,Then it all became so clear,That the pain I thought I had overcome,Was just about to appear.

Answer 1

You are concerned, and rightly so, that you will end up with a man like your father.  

Sometimes, people do make the same mistakes their parents make, sometimes they go overboard in the opposite direction, and sometimes they can learn from their parents' mistakes, and use better judgment.

Evaluate your mother's choice with compassion.  Don't look down on her because she married just a bad guy, but be determined in your heart and mind to pick someone better, and stay single or alone until you find someone who treats you right.  If your mother is willing to talk, she might be able to help you avoid the same mistakes she has made.  If she is defensive about the topic, just drop it, and work it out without her input.

God Bless.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

i didnt know it rimed until i read it out loud    its really good

Answer 4

I like it it captures the pain of women around the word:0