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Care for a thought provoking poem?

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When you're alone

And no one sees you

What do you do?

Are you the same person

You show the world

Would I recognize you

When there are no eyes on you

Do you recall?

That there is one eye

That shuts not at all

Yet records every word

Records every deed

Every dirty secret

One eye does take heed

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  1. it's thought provoking indeed..............sounds like big daddy government :O)))))


  2. nice one, but its a little short  

  3. Hmmm, the mind is God? Nice poem.

  4. Ok...

    Peace

  5. This poem does give one pause to think.  As for me, I am very different alone than my public face, but I do hold myself accountable to a higher power.  I strive to be right thinking as well as right acting, and to make compassion my guide.  This is a very pensive poem. It makes a very eloquent point.   Thank you.

  6. This "all seeing Eye" is very comforting to me.  I feel - that no matter what troubles befall me - that God is already watching and "looking" out for me ♥

  7. Big Brother is watching.....

  8. God knows what others don't perceive. I wish I could say I'm always as I would like to be when alone, but I find I'm only human, after all.

    <><

  9. Sounds like our current government, although I suspect that's not Who is referred to in this poem.

  10. That is very good

    and it is though provoking

    :)

    jlu

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