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Question

It seems I've run all of my life

I have no idea why

I just ran

Getting away from it all

Just to find it again

I ran, and ran, and when I got tired

I ran

Running into walls

Running into luck

Running into people

Even running to the bathroom

My life as a track star

Running the race of life

Answer 1

Walk

Take your time

Enjoy life's blessings

Come walk with me, share my life

Dream...

Don't run

Not to or fro...

Don't be afraid, stand firm

I will be right there at your side

Each step...

What a pleasant surprise... Welcome Back KOB...

Temari

Answer 2

great! =D

Answer 3

All that running - and it seems - you end up back where you started.  Like life is a oval track - when you're running. But it has a lot of side trails - when you take it slow ♥

Answer 4

At least you ran into some luck, but maybe it's time to stop running unless, of course, you have to run to the bathroom again ;)  Very nice poem...I think many of us can relate.

Answer 5

Slow down a bit.

I like the last two lines--the conclusion.

Answer 6

I always walked...very nice poem.

Answer 7

I like, Busy world in deed.

and everywhere I go I find myself.

Answer 8

Even running to the bathroom Hahahaha awesome.

Answer 9

I know the feeling...life goes by fast doesn't it? Sorry...gotta run!

Answer 10

lol ...life is often a marathon.....constant, consistent, continuous....i usually forget to slow down and walk..to conserve my energy...but to be honest ....i hope the finish line is miles away from where i am.....i enjoy the running most of the time

Answer 11

A lot of runs help to convey the message of repetition of the same things.  I like.  Now excuse me, I need to run to a job.

Answer 12

This is really good!

Answer 13

geeee seems to be alot of running going on in this poem, you should call it "The Running Poem"

Oh, and the poem sucked. sorry.