Characters for my story?

Question

this is the descriptions of my characters...want to know if you see the names the same way as i do!

(17/18) oldest girl: blonde, blue eyes,cheerleader, ditzy,stupid but can be smart if she chooses. refuses to let anyone know shes not like the other girls, drives her dads old audi, puts on huge show of being someone shes not. only her sister knows the truth.

*i thought tess nicole...opinions?

twins: B/G (15-16)

B: older, sort of jock-y, but stepped up after his dad died to take care of his sisters (prankster-not). hottie, all the girls love him. light brown hair, green eyes. smart and can be sort of senistive.

*i thought Luke Sebastian...

G: younger, quiet, goes along with everything, not too athletic but pretty smart. maybe plays tennis? hates that her sister is so fake. will only speak up to defend herself/ family. doesnt look like her twin, chestnut/auburn brown hair and aqua blue eyes

*want initials CJ if possible...love the name Carson...

Answer 1

I think Tessa Nicole works a little better than Tess.  It sounds preppier and more cheerleader-y to me.

Luke is okay, but I like Luka and Lucas better.  They sound more grown-up - since you want him to sound mature enough to take care of the girls, it makes sense.  Sound more ... sensative/smart to me.  It also give you the option of having a sister call him Luke or Lukes (in cheerleadery sister's case).

For the younger girl I don't so much like Carson.  It sound very masculine.  Sounds more outgoing - not so shy/reserved like you describe her.  Eh.  While names sound/feel like a big deal, after you read them once or twice you just get used to them - and you associate the traits with the name no matter what they sort of sound like at first.

I like Callie Jane.

Good luck with the writing.

Answer 2

Tessa would sound better than Tess.  It's more feminine to go along with the "stupid ditz" type.

Twins- Good for the boy.  Carson is a boy's name so don't use that on a girl.  What about Carrie Joy or something?

Answer 3

1. Paige or Taylor Paige

2. Girl-Grace, Boy-Luke

3. [idk how many little girls there are so I'll just give you a couple of names] Madison, Emma, Natalie, Katie

Answer 4

1. I first thought of Darla, Tess is pretty cool though.

2. Andrew? Josh maybe.

3. Carla Jade? Christal/Christine Jamie.

Answer 5

Tess Nicole...maybe? Tess isn't really a young person's name anymore (maybe it's because I think of my aunt's friend Tess) But I'm not sure. Maybe you could go with Nicole. It seems sort of young-ish.

Luke Sebastian...is another maybe. I would call him Lucas...seems more sophisticated.

And CJ reminds me of a boy too much. AJ would be cute...the girl seems like an Ashley or something you could call her Ashley Jennette. That would be cute.

But know what...it's YOUR story so you should go along with what you choose. I will tell you...I am writing a story too and my characters is very wierd that you have almost the same as I do. Except my oldest girl is Kelsey Nicole, my twin boys are Derrick Andrew and Christopher Joseph (That's my CJ) and the youngest sister is Elizabeth Lauryn.

Good luck!

Answer 6

1.Tess is perfect for the first description:)

2. how about Adrian, Ian or Ethan for the first names

3.- i feel like the twin girls name needs to be more classic like maybe Rose or something, but i think CJ is very cute maybe they can stand for Carmindy or Carissa or if you like Carson, how about Carson Jolie also i think that Demi would work:)

Answer 7

Girl: Madison Grace Williams

Boy:Ethan Joseph Williams

Girl: Carson Jane Williams.

Answer 8

when i read the oldest girls description i was thinking something like Hayley Maree or kelsey or Carly, but i like tess/a too.

twins: i prefer lucas or luca. or even just Seb.

i dont really like carson for a girl... so what about camryn jeffery... there's ur CJ. or cate, carly, chelsea..

little sisters:

josie, jemma, sylvie, eliza, holly, abbie

Answer 9

I like these names, but how about for the oldest girl, Natasha, or Trisha. For the twin girl, since Carson is a boy's name, name her Cameron

Carrie

Cady

Caitlyn

Camille

Candace

Christina

Christiana

and for her middle name:

Jaymie

Jessica

Jeanette

Julianna

Jasmine

Jessica

Jillian

Jordin

well I hope this helps! BTW, for the boy, I like Luke Sebastian , but I also Like

Jared

******** LOGAN ********** (my favorite!)

Matthew

Isaac

Answer 10

I like all these names. What are their last names? That's just as important if not more so.

Answer 11

oldest girl: April, Layla, Kylie, Misty

B:  James, Brodie, Nick

G: Emma, Cate, Danni

Answer 12

Amber Nicole

Dilan

Erica