Check english grammar, thanks!?

Question

Stream of consciousness

I have a part time job in a McDonald fast food restaurant on holiday.The salary is low,but I learn lots of funny things there on my duty.

Firstly,I fried potato chip around 30 seconds and then put it in small bags on container which keep the normal temperature.Also, I was making delicious hamburger.

Secondly, I was working a cashier, so I must remember different kinds of diet how there was including. I could sleep enough at night because I was very tired and I was afraid to exchange wrong money.

Thirdly, sweeping the path of the floor was one of my duty.

McDonald have many outlets everywhere because there were convenient places and quality snacks, but more vegetable diet is better.

Thanks

Answer 1

I have a part-time job in a McDonald's fast food restaurant while I'm on holiday.The salary is low, but I learn lots of funny things there while I'm on my duty.

First, I fried potato chips for about 30 seconds and then put them in small bags on containers that keep their temperature normal. Also, I was making a delicious hamburger.

Second, I was working as a cashier, so I had to remember different kinds of diets. I could sleep enough at night because I was very tired, and I was afraid to exchange the wrong amount of money.

Third, sweeping the path of the floor was another one of my duties.

McDonald's has many outlets everywhere because they are convenient places that serve quality snacks, but a more vegetable-rich diet is better.

Answer 2

Stream of consciousness

I have a part time job in a McDonalds fast food restaurant. I worked only during the holidays.The salary is low,but I learned lots of funny things while on my duty.

Firstly, I fried potato chips around 30 seconds and then put it in small bags on container which keep the normal temperature. Also, I was making a delicious hamburger.

Secondly, I was working a cashier, so I ????????????

I could sleep enough at night because I was very tired and I was afraid to exchange wrong money.

Thirdly, sweeping the path of the floor was one of my duty.

McDonalds restaurants have many outlets everywhere because they were convenient places for quality snacks, but more vegetable diet is better.

Answer 3

i wish this site was on when i was a kid i could have posted all my homework foflmao

Answer 4

Sorry, good question, but I can't be bothered!!

Answer 5

Check the list below:

1. 'holiday.The ' correct ==> 'holiday. The' - missing space.

2. 'low,but' correct ==> 'low, but' - missing space also.

3. 'Firstly,I' correct ==> 'Firstly, I' - missing space as well.

4. 'temperature.Also' correct ==> 'temperature. Also' - space missed.

5. 'duty' correct ==> 'duties' - plural.

6. 'have' correct ==> 'has' - in statement "McDonald have many ..".

That's it. Good Luck!!

Answer 6

What is ur question ??