Check my grammar mistake please. this is a visit to place arrangements.?

Question

I like going on ammusement park. this park have a natural walks and beautiful garden and this is a children attraction place because boating lake and exciting rides are available. there is a biggest ammusement area.entry ticket is £5 per person and also children free.there i can buy a snacks.totally that park is good place to my visit becuse the summer is starting and now naturally good weather so i can choose a park.

Answer 1

Robert's answer is okay, but it is spelled 'AMUSEMENT' no double M

Answer 2

I would like to go to the ammusement park. This park has nature walks and a beautiful garden, it is for kids because they have a  boating lake and lots of exciting rides there. It is the biggest ammusment park in the area and an entry ticket costs £5 per adult and children enter for free. Food and snacks are available to buy in the park. This park is the best place to visit because the summer is starting and now we're getting good weather you can use the paths and garden.

Hope this helped, i wasn't sure what you were talking about wether you wanted tovisit or telling people you had already.

Good luck

Answer 3

I like going to ammusement parks.  This park has natural walks and beautiful gardens and this is an attraction for children because there is a boating lake and exciting rides are available.  There is a big ammusement area.  Entry tickets are £5 per person and also children free.  There you can buy snacks.  That park is a good place to visit becuse the summer is starting and now there naturally is good weather so i can choose a park.