Check out my poem, what do you think?

Question

Ever Since.

Ever since that day my life changed

Everything became unclear

I was lost in my own thoughts

Confused painfully I asked you

Would you be there for me always?

You said yes.

Everything became more difficult to understand

Life became harder and I felt I couldn't live

I asked you again when I needed you the most

Would you be there for me always?

You said it was over.

You blamed everything on me

You just took it the wrong way

And nothing made sense anymore..

I felt that everything that went wrong in my life is my fault

I blame myself all because you blamed me

You left me and without your friendship I'm nothing

You were irreplaceable and I couldn't accept the fact

That you're gone.

Ever since that day, I'm not who I used to be.

I hate the me that I've become

Truthfully, I can't be the me that I wanted to be.

Ever since that day.

Everything went wrong.

(End)

It kinda tells about what I went threw in the past month and someone I lost.

Answer 1

wow, amazing...youve got some great talent. wonderfull, wonderful, job. Keep up the great work.

Answer 2

It sounds like song lyrics. Very nice! Now, put it to music, and it will be perfect.