Check out my poem Dark Angels?

Question

Tell me what you think, did you like it?

Dark Angels

The dark angels they've forsaken

White souls of pure perfection

Now night stalkers to awaken

And to collect in deception.

By means of eternal lifestyles

Dark angels to repay lords

To gather and swipe the flies

Like reapers with scythes or swords.

Their sniper eyes to shoot and take

A thieving army of angels kill

Will gather gifts cruelly no debate

And flutter down intently still.

Answer 1

cool

Answer 2

yeah, I did like it, I don't quite understand it's meaning, but I like it. good job.