Check this out please???

Question

I just woke up and was trying to get it done, it's not pro or anything but my voice cracked like once or twice. Mainly tell me if you think that a DJ would actually play it because I think it sounds kind of 90's or something like some song SWV would've had out back then. Idk, my friend wrote the chorus and I wrote all the verses. Tell me what you think.

http://www.singsnap.com/snap/watchandlisten/play/bafe3ecc

Peace.

-Btw: It's an A Capella

Answer 1

I think you have potential but I couldn't understand a word you were saying. You were slurring your words.

Answer 2

I'm sorry, but I couldn't understand it at all. But I think you are a good singer :)

Answer 3

if you wrote the song: its not terrible. but its a weak sounding demo.  you could benefit from some voice lessons and you didnt stay in tune.  i agree with the other posters that you need to enunciate your words.  to answer your question, no I dont think a DJ would play it.  but i think the song is interesting and it might be fun for you to find a professional composer and have him look at it and help you a little and see what it can turn into!