Cna you help me with my grammer?

Question

there is not many chance to see cerebrities on that area, so i felt good.

Guam trip is still remain in my memories.

I like to tell you about the country i would like to go someday.

I like to visit Japen this year, or next year.

the most big reason is why i like to go Japen is to meet 0000 who is famous actor in Japen.

I watch many Japenease Dramas, and I started to get interest in that actor.

so I wanted to see the locations that takes film, and watch his play.

Since I became his fan, I get interested Japen's tradition, where I never have been and closest country.

therefore, I'll try to study for Japenease, and chosen Japenease for second semester.

I will study hard, so i can talk freely with Japenease without any help.

please i couldnt post the rest one because of it was too long

and i really thank you to help me out but since it is my first time to using it i dont know how to chose or say thank to you

Answer 1

Firstly, it's Japan. Not Japen.

Japenease Dramas is incorrect.

Japanese dramas is correct.

"meet 0000 who is famous actor ..." is incorrect.

"meet 0000 who is a famous actor" is correct.

Answer 2

I would like to tell a speech about my journey.

Guam was the most impressive place I have ever been when I was in the middle school. I only had one trip abroad, which was Guam. It was a very long time ago, but I can still remember that the trip was very exciting. I was very fluttered and happy because it was my first time to ride in an airplane. I learned lots of experiences and found many different things. I remember that one of my experiences there was scuba diving. Wearing swimming goggles, bringing fish foods in the water, watching fish under the sea, I really enjoyed it. I also rode on banana boats, went to Aboriginal Town, watched their traditional dance, watched people pick coconuts from the tree and learned some myths of Guam. I was there for only five days, but I had a very valuable experience. I learned different cultures and took lots of pictures for remembrance.

On my way back to Korea, I saw some celebrities. Seeing a celebrity on that area was a once-in-a-lifetime chance so I felt very good. But even though it was a long time ago, my trip in Guam still remains in my memories.

Now, speaking of traveling, I would like to tell you about the country I would like to go to someday. Can you guess it? If not, then I'm just going to tell you. I would like to go and visit Japan this year or the next. There are many reasons I would like to go there but the biggest reason is to meet 0000 who is a famous actor in Japan. I watch many Japanese dramas so I started to have interest in that actor, so I wanted to see the place where the drama is filmed and watch him play. Since I became his fan, I got interested in the traditions of Japan, where I never had been and is very close to my country. So, I'll try to study Japanese and chose Japanese for the second semester. I'll study very hard so I can fluently talk in Japanese without any help.

I worked out the rest of your questions, too...! ...And I arranged it in paragraph form so you won't have trouble revising it. Hope I helped. ^_^

Answer 3

There are not many chances to see celebrities in that area, so I felt good.

The trip to Guam is still remains in my memories.

I would like to tell you about the country I’d like to visit someday.

I would like to visit Japan this year, or next year.

The biggest reason I would like to go to Japan is so I could meet 0000 who is a famous actor in Japan.

I watch many Japanese Dramas, and I started to get interested in that actor.

So I wanted to see the locations where he films, and watch his plays.

Since I became his fan, I found interest in Japanese traditions, where I never have been and closest country.—I have no Ideas what that sentence means

Therefore, I will try to study Japanese, and have chosen to study in Japan for my second semester.

I will study hard, so I can speak freely with Japanese people without any help.

I did the best I could, and remember always capitalize the word I and the first word in a new sentence.

Answer 4

>>there is not many chance to see cerebrities on that area, so i felt good.

>>Guam trip is still remain in my memories.

My trip to Guam still remains in my memories.

>>I like to tell you about the country i would like to go someday.

I would like to tell you about the country I would like to go to someday.

>>I like to visit Japen this year, or next year.

I would like to visit Japan this year, or next year.

>>the most big reason is why i like to go Japen is to meet 0000 who is famous actor in Japen.

The main reason I want to visit japan is to meet 0000, who is a famous actor in Japan.

>>I watch many Japenease Dramas, and I started to get interest in that actor.

I watched many Japanese Dramas and started to become interested in that actor.

>>so I wanted to see the locations that takes film, and watch his play.

So i wanted to see the locations the film was shot in, and see his play.

>>Since I became his fan, I get interested Japen's tradition, where I never have been and closest country.

Since I became his fan, I also became interested in Japans tradition, a country i have never visited despite it being the the country closest to mine.

>>therefore, I'll try to study for Japenease, and chosen Japenease for second semester.

Therefore I'll try and study Japanese, and I will choose Japanese for my second semester.

>>I will study hard, so i can talk freely with Japenease without any help.

I will study hard, so I can talk freely with Japanese speakers without any help.

HOPE THIS HELPS YOU, SORRY DON"T UNDERSTAND THE FIRST ONE, TRY USING DIFFERENT WORDS>