College essay issue ??

Question

im working on my college essay and i almost finished it and still trying to edit it by my own, im planing to edit my essay at EssayEdge.com

my uncle told me you shouldnt do that because they want to know who u are and it's not a writing test so u go edit it, he also said that since your from a foreign country if you make essayedge.com edit my essay they will notice that the essay its very high and above your english level (nince english is my second language) and the essay will look that its not made by me,

and im so worried because the essay plays a big part in admission, so do why just depend on myself or let essayedge.com edit it for me

Answer 1

have help from a tutor who went to a similar school. dont use essayedge.com!

Answer 2

Your uncle is right... The essay should represent who you are, but at the same time, you want your essay to be readable too! :) the last thing you want is for your admissions reader to feel frustrated over the various mistakes. It's fine to have your essay grammatically and syntactically correct! It shows you are meticulous and sedulous, despite English being your 2nd language.  Just don't put huge words in them because that's unrealistic for you. Good luck! :)

Answer 3

I would suggest seeing your tutor for supervision on your essay, colleges and universities are extremely strict with using computer programmes for essays as most now use a programme to spot plagiarism and therefore this may not be seen as your own work.  Also why waste all that money, get help from your college there should be support available for students in your circumstances.