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Question

I am-

I am, weak and breakable,

I wonder, why life is so hard,

I hear, my silent teardrops fall,

I see, a puddle of wet salty misery,

I want, to mean it when I smile,

I am, weak and breakable,

I pretend, that my life is flawless,

I feel, like a delicate ripped rose petal,

I touch, my weepy whimpering face to your shoulder as you tenderly hold me close,

I worry, you'll think of me as a different person,

I cry, becasue I can't keep this saddness bottled up,

I am, weak and breakable,

I understand, you want to help me,

But I say, there's nothing you can do,

I dream, of my life without agony, hurting and distress,

I try, not to cry around you,

I hope, you have the patience to see past my faults,

I am, weak and breakable,

♥WWP

Answer 1

A really well written poem that portrays deep, inner hurt.

Answer 2

Again, this is a fabulous and deep poem. People can relate to it. I love it.

Answer 3

OMG that is beautiful, I think it really captures the raw emotions of being desperately miserable. Bravo !

Answer 4

That poem is well written, and I loved it :]

I give it a 10, outta 10.

It shows your feelings, and it's just great!

I'm glad I could read it.

Answer 5

I have read thousands of poems and written many myself.

Your poem touches the deeper emotions and actions of pain.  It is well-written, fluid and relatable.  

Great job.