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Question

Just a Few Questions

So many have come this way and gone,

Does it matter that we two

Came down this path at dawn

And sat on this rock and felt the soft rain on our heads?

Or that we were a magic pair,

Knowing all the world and its meanings,

Forever parts of it, coherent in its nature?

Did it matter to you that I touched your closed eyes,

To sense the beauty of their contoured teguments,

And said bold things about the rightness of your brow?

All love would be regained and harms forgot if that were true,

But you cannot say it to me now.

And though you smiled, did you sleep

While I watched your face?

Could this be lost in time

That we did such things,

And loved,

And had our love?

Even among the many,

Could such wonder be lost?

Answer 1

I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

Answer 2

This is beautiful, it's so detailed and not overly emotional like most love poems.

Answer 3

I usually don't like love poems. But i gotta hand it to you, your first stanza blew me away. You have a great talent, keep posting!