Could someone help me with this poem?

Question

I'm writing a poem for my boyfriend about our relationship and basically how i feel about him. I've written a poem before but never one like this that I would give to someone telling them how I feel? Any advice for writing this poem?

Answer 1

roses are red violets are blue me and you go together like Q and U

i used something just like that ate my aunts wedding i said roses are red violets are blue uncle otis and auntie debbie  go together like Q and U

Answer 2

sit back and let it flow,,, there are no rules to be concerned about,,, get your emotions on paper,,, dig deep to discover what is real and what ain't,,, you can be shallow without effort,,, to be sincere requires YOUR time

Answer 3

Are your feelings at the surface or are they deeper?  What are you learning in this relationship?  Realize that this will not be the last or only relationship for either of you.  Avoid being overly sweet.  Paint a picture, let your feelings flow in colours and images that invite his response, but don't put him on the spot or paint yourself into a corner.

Answer 4

-get into the feeling

-just put your emotions down on paper

the best poetry comes form your hearty not from overthinking!

Answer 5

Well, this is supposed to be coming from YOUR heart. Explaining exactly how much he means to you. I guarantee if you give him one that you have already written he will love it. Because it came from YOUR heart. Also, it might not be as bad as you think. The worst person to critisize your work is yourself. Just go for it! =)

Answer 6

I agree with Shelby. Just sit down with pen and paper and pretend you are writing your deepest thought down in your journal (diary) and that you will be the only one to ever see it. By doing this, you allow yourself to open your heart and soul resulting in your truest emotions being written. Don't think about it. When you think about what you want to write, it will show. The words can, and usually do, sound forced; not coming from your heart but coming from your head. And just like Shelby said, your biggest and sometimes worst, critique is you. As far as what others think, if what you wrote is really how you feel, others will be able to feel what you feel through your words and that, my dear, will make them like your work; even love it! So relax, and just follow your heart. You will see; the words will just pour out so easily and even fast at times, amazing your self when your done because you will think, "Wow! Where did all that come from?" Good luck and I would love to read your finished work if you wouldn't mind!