Could someone please rate my Water Monsters (Yu-Gi-Oh)?

Question

This is not for any official games or anything, but instead for a story I'm writing and this is the deck of the main character. Can someone please rate my selection of monsters so far?

X2 - WATER - Star Boy (2 star)

X3 - WATER - Mother Grizzly (4 Stars)

X2 WATER - Cure Mermaid (4 Stars)

X2 - WATER - Deep Diver (3 Star)

WATER - Mermaid Knight (4 Star)

WATER - Aqua Spirit (4 Stars)

WATER - Yomi Ship (3 Star)

WATER - Cold Enchanter (4 Star)

WATER - Deepsea Macrotrema (1 Star)

WATER - Blizzd - Guard of the Ice Boundary (1 Star)

WATER - Misairuzame (5 Star)

WATER - Catapult Turtle (5 Star)

WATER - Spiral Serpent (8 Star)

WATER - Levia-Dragon - Daedalus (7 Star)

WATER - Suijin (7 Star)

WATER - Ocean Dragon Lord - Neo-Daedal us (8 Star)

Answer 1

yeah you really can be any age. my dad still plays.

good selection. you should *** Amfibiuos Bourogh Mk3 and the spell card Yomi. The'll help you alot.

i also suggest adding Cloudian Nimbusman and Cloidian Gohst Fog. They make a good combo too.

Answer 2

Try this. (Sigh)

Monsters: 20

Tribute:

Levia-Dragon - Daedalus

Levia-Dragon - Daedalus

Mobius the Frost Monarch

Non-Tribute:

Amphibious Bugroth MK-3

Amphibious Bugroth MK-3

Hydrogeddon

Hydrogeddon

Hydrogeddon

Mother Grizzly

Mother Grizzly

Mother Grizzly

Nightmare Penguin

Nightmare Penguin

Penguin Soldier

Penguin Soldier

Penguin Soldier

Warrior of Atlantis

Warrior of Atlantis

Abyss Soldier

Spells: 13

A Legendary Ocean

A Legendary Ocean

A Legendary Ocean

Heavy Storm

Level Limit - Area B

Monster Reborn

Mystical Space Typhoon

Premature Burial

Card Destruction

Shrink

Shrink

Shrink

Traps: 7

Gravity Bind

Magic Cylinder

Mind Crush

Spiritual Water Art

Spiritual Water Art

Spiritual Water Art

Trap Dust Shoot

Mirror Force

Torrential Tribute

Answer 3

Being an Ocean duelest, i will give it a 7/10 some cards that would be better for your story are Warrier of Alantis, The Legendary Fisherman, Nightmare Peguin, Abbyss Solider, Mobius the Frost Monarch, Frostasaurs, MK3 Grotto Moth, Terraking Salmon, Gigigago, Seaserpant Warrier of Darkness, just to name a few of the best water attribute monster out there.

Answer 4

9.5/10 it's good! i use water deck too right now.

Answer 5

i'm not the best judge at water monsters that's just not my style i'm more of an dragon guy myself but so far you did pretty good

Answer 6

you might wanna have that chrektor have a few more high level monsters and satar boy should be in ONLY if he's thair in place of a kuriboh if not take him out and add in one of the kuribohs other then that good choies of monsters for a future anime charektor (you might wanna change it as 5D gos along) 8/10 for a new anime but really give him a kuriboh even if they haf to wait to see kuriboh!! ^_^