Could someone please rate my poem and give me advice?

Question

Title: "What True Love Means"

Then I saw her face,

And my heart paced.

I may not know many things,

but I do know what true love means.

You say your nothing special,

I'd have to disagree.

You're my essentials,

You mean everything to me.

How could this be wrong?

with feelings so true.

Just prove me wrong,

and I'll move away from you.

But until that day,

I think I'll stay.

I hope this doesn't sound cliche,

but I never want these feelings to decay.

And the heavens must be true,

cause the skys are growing blue

and when the nights are through,

my heart still beats for you.

So I sit and pray,

that somehow someday,

You will notice me and say

Finally today, I'll know what True Love Means.

Answer 1

It's very interesting & I like your choice of words.

Here are a few comments:

"And my heart paced" -- I'm not sure about the word paced.  Can a heart pace?  How about "my heart raced" instead?

"You're my essentials"

How about instead of this -- Everything that is you is essential or Only you are essential

"but I never want these feelings to decay" -- instead of decay, how about go away?  or fade away?

"cause the skys are growing blue" -- skys should be sky, don't you think?

"Finally today, I'll know what True Love Means."

I love the last line -- great ending!!!!

My advice:  Good job!!!!  Keep writing!  Try to have fun with it and not get too caught up in what other people say.