Could someone write a blurb for my story "Helena"? ?

Question

the story is about a girl named helena, she was the heir to the "Fox" fortune. her father had an illness, so she would soon be have the vast £20.000! but as she was at the train station to leave to a university in cornwall, her cousin, Frankie was immensely jealous of her- tied her to the train tracks. (i can't tell you how, that would be giving it away ;]) anyway, after she died, she came back to haunt him and his family. his mum, his dad, and his little sister fiona. helena kills all of Frankie's loved ones, first his friend, then his little sister, and then his mum and dad, until the end where she kills him.

could someone please write me a blurb for the story? i'm not very good at writing blurbs, or descriptions of my story!

thankyou x

Answer 1

He thought this was the end, but he was way off.

Her father was on deaths door and she was to be the heir to the 'Fox' fortune, though fate said other wise. Frankie, Helena's cousin, finds he can't control this rage of jealous any longer and lashes out. He wants to bring Helena down. He needs too. He wants the fortune for himself. But even after death Helena can't be stopped. She knows what she wants and no one can get in her way.. Not even family.......

I hope this is good, I know it can be better but its hard to write it when I don't know the whole story. The details.

Though I'm sure if you tryed you could come up with something, as no one knows the story better then you!

(if you like it please tell me..... i wanna know what u think)

Answer 2

You don't need much help. Tidy up what you wrote in your question, and instead of telling us about the killings, simply hint at the terrible vengeance that she wreaks on Frankie and his family, leaving us curious as to what she actually did. That way we'll have to read your book to find out.