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I have recently come across with the topic ‘Green Chemistry’ and the term ‘sustainable development’ in the lessons.

Everyday, people in world produced and generated countless waste which can cause irreversible effects on the earth. In this year, Greece reached an unusual high temperature, unprecedented ice melting rate increase in both north poles and south poles. It is time for us to do something fixing up the problems. It is recommended that we should turn off the machines that would cause great amount of power and energy if we don’t use them at the moment. Moreover, Government and several authorities should put more constraints to limit the use of environmental unfriendly materials. If we still ignore the problems, we definitely will face an even more severe condition in the future. ‘Sustainable development’ is not just the problem of profits or revenues for the minors. It is indeed a matter of life and death.

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  1. I have recently come across a topic ‘Green Chemistry’ and the term ‘sustainable development’ in my study.

    Everyday, people all over the world produce and generate excessive waste, which can cause irreversible effect and damage on the earth. This year, Greece reached an unusually high temperature; unprecedented ice melting rate increased in both  the north pole and south pole.

    It is time for us to do something to fix the problem. It is recommended that we should turn off machines, switch off tv and other items instead of leaving them on standby, washing machines - switch to 30 degrees wash or better still cold wash.  Switch off all appliances and lights not in use, use energy efficient light bulbs and buy energy efficient electricals.  Moreover, Government and several authorities should put more constraints to limit the use of environmental unfriendly materials. Reduce overseas flights to one per person per year. If we ignore the problem of global warming, we definitely will face an even more severe condition in the future. ‘Sustainable development’ is not just the problem of profits or revenues. It is indeed a matter of life and death.

    Too late when there is no longer any green grass and all vegetation begins to die, as man will have achieved his self destruction.


  2. Just face it...We are screwed!

  3. I have recently come across the topic ‘Green Chemistry’ and the term ‘sustainable development’ in my lessons.

    Everyday, people in the world produce and generate countless waste, which can cause irreversible effects on Earth. This year, Greece has reached unusually high temperatures, and an unprecedented ice melt rate increase at both the North Pole and South Pole. It is time for us to do something to fix the problems. It is recommended that we should turn off any equipment that cause the greatest amount of power and energy if they are not necessary.  Moreover, the Government and several authorities should put more constraints to limit the use of environmentally unfriendly materials. If we still ignore the problems, we definitely will face even more severe conditions in the future. ‘Sustainable development’ is not just the problem of profits or revenues for the minors. It is indeed a matter of life and death.

  4. I've tried not to change any of the content. Here's a spruced up version for you:

    I have recently come across the topic of ‘Green Chemistry’ and the term ‘Sustainable Development’ in my work.

    Everyday people globally produce and generate an incredible amount of waste which can cause irreversible damage to the Earth. This year, Greece reached an unusually high temperature. There was also unprecedented ice melting rate increases, both in the North and South Poles. It is time for us to do some fixing and prevention of the problems at hand. The scientific community recommends that we turn off any energy producing appliance or equipment when it's not in use. Moreover, there should be an involvement of governmental agencies to put more legal constraints, to limit the use of environmentally unfriendly materials. If we continue to ignore these environmental problems, we will face an even more severe condition in the future. ‘Sustainable development’ is not just an issue of profits or revenues. It is indeed a matter of life and death on a global level.

  5. You naughty boy terence do your own homework.

  6. "WHAT`S UP?"

  7. I have recently become familiar with the topic ‘Green Chemistry’ and the term ‘Sustainable Development’.

    Everyday, people in the World produce and generate countless waste products which can cause irreversible effects on the Earth. In this year alone, Greece reached unusually  high ambient temperatures and unprecedented ice melting rates continually  increase in both North and South poles. It is unarguably time for us to do something to address these issues. The recommendation is that we should restrict or strive to find environmentally friendly alternatives to some machines and processes that consume a great amount of power and energy. Moreover, Governmental and other authorities should impose more constraints to limit the use of environmentally unfriendly processes and materials. If we continue to ignore these problems, we will almost certainly face more severe environmental conditions in the future which will be even more challenging to resolve. ‘Sustainable Development’ is not just an economic issue, it is literally a matter of life and death for present and future generations.

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