Could you correct my English letter, please?

Question

I think I couldn’t get all my thought across to you. We did have a busy time at our holiday and when I came back here I felt some kind of comfort like home and fatigue as well. As I did last one year, I will do my best in remaining time as I can . You always tried to give me more outcome to me and I will follow your thought and I’ll give my strength to continue on.

I am a bit confusing about some problems which were always with me such as what should I do after this, and how my son stay longer and so on. Anyway as you said, I need to figure out step by step. If you have some free time, could you give me some advice about this?

In regarding the invoice, I would be glad if you send a invoice to me by my address ( )

I always appreciate your support during my stay in here.

with kind regards

In advance Thank you very much for your patient note

Answer 1

I think I couldn’t get all my thoughts across to you. We did have a busy time at our holiday.  When I came back here I felt some kinds of comfort like being home and fatigue as well. As I did last  year, I will do my best in the remaining time I have. You always tried to give me more outcomes  and I will follow your thoughts and I’ll give all my strength to continue on.

I am a bit confused about some problems which were always with me, such as: What should I do after this ?  How my son may stay longer and so on? Anyway as you said, I need to figure out step by step. If you have some free time, could you give me some advice about this?

In regarding the invoice, I would be glad if you send an invoice to me at my address .

I always appreciate your support during my stay in here.

With kind regards,

Answer 2

I think I couldn’t get all my thought across to you. We did have a busy time at our holiday, and when I came back, I felt some kind of comfort like home and fatigue. As I did one year before, I will do my best in remaining time as I can . You always have tried to give me more outcome to me, and I will follow your thought. I’ll give my strength to continue on.

I am a bit confused about one or two problems which are always with me, such as what should I do after this, and how my son could stay longer and so on. Anyway as you said, I need to figure it out step by step. If you have some spare time, would you be willing to give me some advice about this?

Regarding the invoice, I would be glad if you send a invoice to my house address ( )

I always appreciate your support during my stay here.

Yours Sincerely

In advance Thank you very much for taking up your spare time.

Answer 3

I'm not sure that I managed to communicate all my thoughts to you.  We did have a busy time on our holiday and when I got back here I felt relief at being home and pretty tired as well.  As I did last year, I will carry on trying to do my best.  You have always been most helpful to me and I will think about what you said and put a lot of effort into carrying on.  (Not quite sure what you mean here)

I am a bit confused about some problems I have always had, such as what I should do next and how I can fix for my son to stay longer, and so on.  Anyway, as you said, I need to figure it all out step by step.  If you have some free time, could you give me some advice about this?

Regarding the invoice, I would be glad if you could send it to me at my address: .....

I have really appreciated your support during my stay in this country. (??)

With kind regards,