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However, we must differentiate between the scientific definition and the definition of the general public.

In fact, when we talk about cloning in the general public, they immediately think about the technique is to create an individual with the help of stem cells. While scientists speak of clones from the moment two cells have the same genetic heritage. They distinguish between clone "in vivo" when it comes to individuals and clones "ex vivo" when it is simply cells.

Thus according to the scientific definition, contrary to what we may think, cloning is something that has existed for a long time and is widely practiced in nature. Indeed, for example in humans, the cells renew themselves by multiplying at the same: it’s the mitosis.

After fertilization, we can also observe the phenomenon of cloning: Initially there is a cell that makes mitoses then each cell specializes in a spot to give cells in the heart, brain, eyes… Cloning is a completely natural phenomenon.

Answer 1

i cant be bothered

Answer 2

the text is correct!!! remember to replace the capital I (Initially there is a cell that makes....) with i..!!

good job...

Giulia

Answer 3

Why?

'cloning: Initially...' should be 'cloning: initially...', btw.

Otherwise could I correct the text? Yes.

Will I correct the text? No. I won't correct this text because:

1) I happen to believe one should do one's own work and stand or fail on one's own abilities, not someone else's;

2) English, its usage, its grammar, its form, all differ depending on one's location so unless you want it turned into strine.....

Answer 4

Its a good article, but your argument has some holes in it. I hope this helps, and something I didn't correct because I wasn't sure what you were trying to say.

   However, we must differentiate between the scientific definition and public definition of the term ‘cloning’. When we, the general public, refer to cloning we most often conclude that the term means to create an identical individual with the help of stem cells. Scientists on the other hand, define a clone the moment two cells have the same genetic heritage.

     Scientists separate clones into two subcategories; “in vivo” and “ex vivo”. In vivo refers to the cloning of individuals and ex vivo refers to the cloning of cells.

    Thus, according to the scientific definition, cloning is a process that has been present for a long time (how long is a long time), and can be seen widely in nature. For example, in humans, the cells (all cells?) renew themselves by multiplying at the same (same what?) (What are you trying to say, this sentence is unclear): called mitosis.

     Another example, of the natural phenomenon of cloning, can be observed after fertilization. Initially there is a cell that makes (undergoes? Instead of makes) mitosis, then each cell specializes in a spot to give cells in the heart, brain, eyes (and other organs and tissues?)… Cloning is process that is shown to be a completely natural process. (what about when scientists mess with the process, sheep don’t clone themselves naturally? Just trying to help strengthen your argument)

Answer 5

However, we must differentiate between the scientific definition and the definition of the general public.

In fact, when we talk about cloning in the general public, they immediately think about the technique is to create an individual with the help of stem cells. While scientists speak of clones from the moment two cells have the same genetic heritage. They distinguish between clone "in vivo" when it comes to individuals and clones "ex vivo" when it is simply cells.

Thus according to the scientific definition, contrary to what we may think, cloning is something that has existed for a long time and is widely practiced in nature. Indeed, for example in humans, the cells renew themselves by multiplying at the same: it’s the mitosis.

After fertilization, we can also observe the phenomenon of cloning: Initially there is a cell that makes mitoses then each cell specializes in a spot to give cells in the heart, brain, eyes… Cloning is a completely natural phenomenon.

You need to capitalize your letters in parenthesis . You don't need to capitalize your I in initially.