Could you help me correct the grammatical errors pls pls pls? If you're good in english...

Question

Here's the paragraph:

The game had now started and I had no choice but to play ball. And that's I had to lie. I knew myself to be the less adequate person for acting in a such wrong way. I had never lied in my whole life. But life teaches you that this is a sinful world, a world where in some instances the righteousness becomes the looser and the lies help you go through the next step. Sure, both the truth and the

lie have their own consequences, and at that moment I was taught that the consequences of telling the truth were more severe than those of telling a lie. I was becoming part of the sinful world. I, too was about to sin as I pronounced those words:Hi, we are from ....". I was already shaking while bearing in mind the orders given by the ...... I had at all costs refuse the idea that in reality, we were from ......, due to the fear of sending us back home.

"Which part of K do you come from?"she asked.

I had not thought about this possible question, and at that moment I didn't have any answers with me. But I was not prepared to surrender, so I decided to take time, and think smart.

"I am sorry, I didn't really hear you, could you please repeat what you said?" I asked

The interpreter, spoke loudly and clearly.

I had now come up with an answer.

Answer 1

And that's I had to lie.( it doesn't make sense, also you never start a sentence with and.It would be better off if you wrote.... The game had now started and I had no choice but to play ball, and that's why I had to lie.)

But life teaches you that this is a sinful world, a world where in some instances the righteousness becomes the looser and the lies help you go through the next step.

(do you mean loser?)

I, too was about to sin as I pronounced those words:

( I too,)

Hi, we are from ....". I was already shaking while bearing in mind the orders given by the ...... I had at all costs refuse the idea that in reality, we were from ......, due to the fear of sending us back home.

(that part doesn't make much sense to me either)

Answer 2

Here's the paragraph:

The game had now started and I had no choice but to play. Although I had to lie. I knew was a lesser person for acting in a such a wrong way. I had never lied in my whole life. But life teaches you that this is a sinful world, a world where in some instances the righteousness becomes the looser and that lies help you get through to the next step. Sure, both the Truth and the

Lie have their own consequences, and at that moment I was taught that the consequences of telling the truth were more severe than those of telling a lie. I was becoming part of the sinful world. I, too was about to sin as I said, "Hi, we are from ....". I was already shaking. While bearing in mind the orders given to me by the ... I had refused the idea that in reality, we were from ..., due to the fear of sending us back home.

"Which part of ... do you come from?"she asked.

I had not thought about this possible question, and at that moment I didn't have any answers with me. But I was not prepared to surrender, so I decided to take time, and think smart.

"I am sorry, I didn't really hear you, could you please repeat what you said?" I asked

The interpreter, spoke loudly and clearly.

Answer 3

If I could understand what it meant, I would try to correct it.

Answer 4

Is this a joke?

Answer 5

keeping your main text intact, here goes ....

The game had now started & I had no choice but to play ball. And that's why I had to lie. I knew myself to be a lesser person for acting in such a wrong way. i had never lied in my whole life. but life teaches you that this is a sinful world, a world where, in some instances, the righteous (you could replace this with right or truth) becomes the loser and the lies help you go through to the next step. Sure, both the truth and the lie have their own consequences, and that moment taught me that the consequences of telling the truth were more severe than those of telling a lie. I was becoming part of the sinful world. I, too, was about to sin, as I pronounced those words, "Hi, we are from...". I was already shaking, while bearing in mind the orders given by the.... I had, at all costs, refused the idea that, in reality we were from ..., due to the fear of being sent back home.



..........

"I am sorry, I didn't really hear you. Could you ......."

the rest seems fine.

all the best

Answer 6

Ok so is it about being an Illegal working in a foreign country ? without a permit (for example)... maybe ?

Anyway here goes.......

I had never lied in my whole life, and all I knew was that, in order to 'play the game' I had no choice but to go against all I believed in.

Life teaches you that it is a 'sinful world' a world where the rightous becomes the loser, and the ones that tell the lies, have to face their own consequences in order to go through life with all its consequences.

At that moment, I was faced with the severity of telling such a lie, and  'as a liar'  I was becoming part of that 'sinful world. I was about to sin, and I hated it.

The words "Hi, where are you from ?", were ordered, given by the ......

I was shaking knowing that if  I answered truthfully, we would be sent home.

Again she asked " which part of K do you come from ?", it took me by surprise and I hadn't thought of my answer,  I wasn't prepared to surrender, so I decided to  'think smart'.

"Sorry" I answered, "I didn't really hear you, could you repeat the question ?", the interpreter, again spoke, this time more loudly and clearly, suddenly I realised that I had to answer her question.

is this ok... ?

Caramac x

Answer 7

I don't think even Thomas Pynchon could figure out that one