Could you please comment on my poem?

Question

You can watch me from afar,

with only your eyes burning deep into my soul.

Fear is how i feel when I look at you.

Your heart is cold.

Your body, soulless.

I wonder if you ever knew what love was,

In all your years of being a prince,

did they ever teach you that?

To see what you want,

To want what you cant have.

Such purity, and innocence,

More light in a single word,

that in your whole being.

I think it is you,

who feels the fear now.

Take me away from my world,

of colour, scent and sound,

and place me into your own.

I do not wish to be there.

I am afraid.

Answer 1

It is nice but I cannot interpret it.

What does it mean?

Answer 2

i neve know what the heck poetry is actually about and i never understand these hidden meanings.

But i loved our poem, it was really good :)

Answer 3

*,*

that was great.

Answer 4

i loved our poem too :)

Answer 5

It's a nice poem, full of depth. But unless the reader is in the same mental space as you, it would be difficult to establish empathy with it.

Answer 6

somebody stirred you up didn't they..very good I like it.

Answer 7

It's beautiful