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Dear XX,
I would like to tell you about our little expectation. We hope that x*x School District will place my niece, Yujin, in the appropriate school. As you may know, I just hope that Yujin can go to a school for her to prepare for becoming a school-teacher. We also hope she will be arranged in a school that is not very strict or not conservative. I hope Yujin will get placed in a school that gives students enough freedom at school.
We are not going to be pleased if we had to move to another place due to my niece's requirement for another school in the future. That is why I am so struggling from finding a good school for her. Please don't hesitate if you have any questions regarding on the school for my niece.
I look forward to hearing from you.
PS: I wonder if the office has received the money draft I mailed. The school district was supposed to receive it yesterday according to the post office.
Best regards,
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