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Question

Everything She Was

As each day goes by she is holding her breath

The lump in her throat and the beat in her chest

Grows bigger and faster as tears fill her eyes

She hits the cold floor and her life passes by

Flash after flash the white light blinds

Her blood shot eyes and aching mind

She can’t see nor think what to do now

So she huddles up with her face in the ground

One little voice inside of her mind

Takes everything, all of her life

Everything that she has to do

All that she is, all of her use

Her future is lost along with her dreams

Who knows who she was supposed to be?

Life was too tough and she wanted to be free

That girl gave up on you and on me

Answer 1

wow.. very sweet, emotional and sincer everything you need in a poem . Good Job!

Answer 2

i really like the begining and the strong ending

Answer 3

WoW!

Very emotional, honest,  and beautiful!

Really good job!!

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