Could you please tell me what is wrong with my photo?

Question

I really enjoy photography, and am always taking photos, but i feel my photos are lacking something, i dont know what but something is missing, any advice would be helpful, such as composition, lighting, colour, exposure, anything! thanks alot,

http://www.flickr.com/photos/squance/2772510800/sizes/l/

Answer 1

Very good - A rating. I would if possible damping the bright white at the center. It creates a burn out. Althought I like it the way it is, having been judged in a photo club (novice) level, they constantly nag my pics for burn areas, hot spots etc.

There are a few ways to fix the burn, the harder is a a multi expose shot, overlaying the images of each section taken with the correct exposure on the camera for the avaible light. The easier way is to photoshop it, but you really need some image in the background to photoshop with, pure white is tricky.

Still however an excellent shot.

Answer 2

there's nothing you really need to change.

But personally I rather like this photo..

so I don't thing there needs to be anything changed

Answer 3

Thats hella tight. I like it.. I dont know anything about photography but It doesnt look like u need to change anything.  

Answer 4

This picture scares me! I mean not in a bad way but its really good! Im not just saying that so you'll pick me for 10 pts. I don't care about points! This is a really nice picture, it has a real creepy side to it!

Answer 5

I think that the picture if perfect the way it is. My brother and I are also into photography and we think it's great. I think you should frame it.

Answer 6

its really good nothings wrong with it. i do the samething when i make something. i just want it to be better and better, so i always think something is missing when nothings really missing.

Answer 7

maybe you could of added a dimming light on the ceiling...

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Answer 8

holy moleyyyy!

its amazing don't

change a thing its perfect

idk what about that it is but it

has the most amazing eefffectt!

Answer 9

This is something I have gotten knocked down in competitions for. When you have strong leading lines they should lead to something interesting. You have very strong lines leading to the door at the end, so that's fine, but the subject you are leading to is dead central in the image, which makes it quite static. I would like to have seen a view shifted over to your right, showing more of the left and making the door less centered.

I really do like the image.

Answer 10

I don't see much wrong with it, to be honest.  I like the diverging lines effect, and there's pattern.  But I will agree, there is no "pop" to it.  Perhaps a change in perspective would give it some depth.