Could you please tell me what you think of this poem I just wrote?

Question

A tree that falls by itself, does it make a sound?

You would assume so, when the tree's found;

or, so it has been said.

If I killed myself and nobody knew about it...

Would I really be dead?

After the fact, would the obituary be read?

Now, what would come to your head?

"Tomorrow is never promised."

Perhaps that's true;

Until you wonder...

"So, is that a fitting eulogy for me or you?"

Some may think so, but is it really you?

You may enjoy the thought, but I don't.

Some things are missing in everyone's life...

Anything missing, is everything really alright?

You never know until it's shown, do you?

Yelling truths that people don't believe;

On "myself", a topic that's contradictory.

Underneath layers of other truths.

Calling for some ways of proof;

And hoping things could fix themselves...

Never do problems solve with a "poof".

Hate me all you'd like

Every day

Let yourself, if you want to.

Praying for better days, is all I can really do or say.

- J.M.

Answer 1

I don't really understand it...

Answer 2

I don't hate you, but I didn't care for this at all.  The first line shoots it down right away, for who has not heard that old proverb.  You rhymed, yes, but you also rambled.

Answer 3

Very Deep Meaning Here, I feel you are Expressing Yourself Beautifully.

Keep up The Good Work,-J.M.X

Answer 4

I find your ideas confusing and not well explained.  I think you should stick to one idea and expound on that thought.