Could you rate my poem on a scale of 1-10?

Question

Blood shot eyes

And smeared mascara

Telling lies

To avoid you

It’s not really true

Buy that’s just life

All alone

Up in this room

With no one to hold me

And call me there own

Welcome to paradise

Telling lies to avoid you

It’s not really true

But that’s just life

Welcome to paradise

It’s your home sweet home

Away from home

Here you’re happy ending

Welcome to paradise

Blood shot eyes

And smeared mascara

It’s no lie

That in the end you die

Answer 1

8

Answer 2

The worst! 1 point out of any given number! u may be a cute person with a nice heart but ur terrible wiritng makes u seem worthless! haha!

KIDDING, big time. i actually knw about five pppl who wuld just LUVE you! i'll introduce u 2 sum HOT girls who LUV hot guys like u!

ooh. Steve. ;)

Good luck, artist teen!

Answer 3

7.83737292837393819373839383938382 ...round it off to an 8

Answer 4

8.5 :)

Answer 5

Graet, 7/10

Answer 6

7.5

Answer 7

deffiantely a 10! keep it up!

Answer 8

its very depressing i give it a 7 and a half

Answer 9

5.  And the entire 5 points is based on the fact that you actually seem to have some lyrical talent. However, your subject matter rates a 0.  When it is all tragedy and tears, it seems self serving and shallow.  So as a writer, you have something, but you need to snap out of the oh poor me black winter phase.  

Answer 10

I'd give it a 8.

I like the creativity and the mixed style you choose.

Answer 11

1111111111100000000000000000000000!!!!!!...

who cares about spelling its only answers

very sweet kinda free style poem

ohh great no that stupid speach bubble thing says i have to much punctuation

Answer 12

5

Answer 13

TEN! It's so... MCR-ish.

Answer 14

777!

Answer 15

I'll give it a 7 or 8. I thought it was great, keep it up!

Answer 16

4

Answer 17

10

Answer 18

that was really good. 9.5

Answer 19

Correct some of the spelling and I would give it an 8..

Answer 20

its a 6 or a 7 but it needs to be longer.. and it just suddenly ends.. the ending needs 2 be slower and more passionate

Answer 21

In one word? Cliched. It sounds as if you've just pulled lines from every other emo poem written and smashed them together in some random order. Repetitive and self-gratifying. Not to mention the rhyming over "eyes" "lie" and "die" is overused. I give it a 2.

Answer 22

It's good rather sad maybe a 7 would be better with spelling corrected.