Could you rate my yu-gi-oh deck and improve it for me?

Question

Blue-Eyes White Dragon

Majestic Mech - Goryu

Super Conductor Tyranno

Guardian Angel Joan

Jinzo

Summoned Skull

Amphibian Beast

Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV6

Alien Shocktrooper

Sabersaurus

Charcoal Inpachi

The Forgiving Maiden (2x)

Marshmallon

Shining Angel (2x)

Mystical Elf

Herald of Creation

Mask of Darkness

Ameba (2x)

Kaiser Sea Horse (3x)

Snipe Hunter

Twin-Headed Behemoth

Soul Exchange (3x)

Lightning Vortex (2x)

Gravekeeper's Servant

Foolish Burial

Monster Reborn

Axe of Despair

Black Pendant

Megamorph

Horn of the Unicorn

Mystical Space Typhoon

Waboku (3x)

Negate Attack

Tornado Wall

Robbin' Goblin

Dust Tornado

Sakuretsu Armor

Draining Shield

If you could tell me any cards that would be good to add or take out i would really appreciate it. Thanks

Answer 1

8/10,

     get the other horuses if you can, take out 2 wabokus, get some more grave-summoning cards like call of the haunted and the shallow grave, and that's about it.

Answer 2

take out horn of unicorn, ameba, that seems really useless in this deck

i would take out forgiving maiden, mystical elf  as well and charcoal impachi because it seems like this is an aggro deck so focus on either summoning blues eyes or ur guardian joan

take out the mech and the tyranno, just focus on one summoning

take out Amphibian Beast and Horus the Black Flame Dragon LV6, snipe hunter, mask of darkness

add torrential tribute and more 1900  four star monster like gemini elf and archfiend soldier, maybe the creator if ur aiming on special summoning, smashing grounds to clear ur opponents field easier, a mirror force if u can get ur hands on one, a royal decree, theres more cards you can add, but i cant think of any right now